I particularly like the start - it really draws you in with the humdrum and you paint a very detailed picture of the "boring" before the meet cute, as it were.
I can picture the city, your apartment, your "grey".
The feeling that nothing really happened with this girl but in fact something did, at least, to the boy, is sad but hopeful. I like the need to get something out but never doing it. Great cliffhanger.
Glued to the phone, but there's still a tenderness there for her. That's sweet.
I particularly like the start - it really draws you in with the humdrum and you paint a very detailed picture of the "boring" before the meet cute, as it were.
I can picture the city, your apartment, your "grey".
The feeling that nothing really happened with this girl but in fact something did, at least, to the boy, is sad but hopeful. I like the need to get something out but never doing it. Great cliffhanger.
Glued to the phone, but there's still a tenderness there for her. That's sweet.
thanks for your comment! I'm glad for the appreciation and for how specific you were. <3
Hi saw you on Reddit. Wishing you the best on here. I love a good second person story. Very poetic. Would love to know what you think of my stories.
thanks! I'll check out your profile as well then. Nice to meet you